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		<title>Memories of Mr. Benson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joseph Kaufman</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[My first writing teacher was Mr. Benson, a former Marine, at Theodore Herbert Middle School in Pittsfield, Massachusetts. Mr. Benson had a high forehead and crew-cut hair, plus a good selection of striped, club ties. He wore starched, button-down shirts of various yuppie shades, West Point-creased trousers, and wing-tip shoes. He was linebacker wide and [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>     My first writing teacher was Mr. Benson, a former Marine, at Theodore Herbert Middle School in Pittsfield, Massachusetts. Mr. Benson had a high forehead and crew-cut hair, plus a good selection of striped, club ties. He wore starched, button-down shirts of various yuppie shades, West Point-creased trousers, and wing-tip shoes. He was linebacker wide and what I would call halfway tall, was a scratch golfer, and wore a clunky class ring. He resembled not so much an English teacher of white, middle class teenagers as a drill instructor forced to dress up for an unwanted business presentation. He read us Hemingway, made us read Hemingway, assigned us to write a one-paragraph pastiche of Hemingway&#8217;s style, then made us rewrite that paragraph and rewrite it again before moving on to read and mimic other writers and, eventually, write a short story. A stickler for grammar, a stickler for spelling, a stickler for handing things in on time, he wrote his comments in the margins in feathery, almost unreadably light pencil. He was spare in his criticisms&#8212;&#8221;Too many adjectives&#8221;&#8212;and spare in his praise. If you wrote a truly wonderful paragraph, he wrote, &#8220;You made your point.&#8221; He was demanding, fair, once in a while funny in a corny, parental way The incongruence of a Marine teaching creative writing was not lost on us and added to an allure founded on a legend that he&#8217;d once decked a kid who talked back to him. In one of my braver moments, after I&#8217;d written a decent paragraph, I asked if the story was true. Mr. Benson sat on the corner of his desk, folded his arms over that well-starched shirt and still-firm chest, gave me one of those macho man looks, how a toreador might regard a bull he didn&#8217;t respect, and nodded slightly, that slightness meaning to convey that he&#8217;d do it again if he needed to, even to pretty Gina Campoli if she deserved it, a manner which reminded me of what Ahab once said to the crew of the Pequod, &#8220;Talk not to me of blasphemy, man; I&#8217;d strike the sun if it insulted me.&#8221; </p>
<p>     I left middle school for high school and never ran into a good writing teacher again until my second year in college&#8212;and maybe I&#8217;ll write about David Huddle next week. But many years later, many many in fact, after I graduated from Bennington College, enlisted in the Peace Corps, did my stint in yeshiva, in my father&#8217;s Kay-Bee business, after I was already married, had a couple of kids, and moved to Israel, I was lucky enough to get my first novel published&#8212;-and how can you call getting published anything but some name of Providence?&#8212;by Walker Company, now a division of Random House. And when that summer following the publication, my parents threw a signing party at the local book store in Lenox, Massachusetts, I looked up Mr. Benson&#8217;s number in the Pittsfield phone book. I called him up and invited him to the party. He showed up in golfing cap and clothes, Scottish-looking, like he&#8217;d just strode in from the links at St. Andrews. He was trimmer than I remembered him, with a cherubic pink on his cheeks. I autographed a copy of A Good, Protected Life and showed him in the Acknowledgments where I mentioned his name. He shook my hand enthusiastically as I said thanks for the great teaching those many years ago. And I heard from my mother via a friend of hers who was a guidance counselor at the middle school and witnessed this, that Mr. Benson took the book to the teacher&#8217;s room and held it up to everyone and said, &#8220;Sometimes it&#8217;s worth it.&#8221; </p>

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